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Critique by DisturbingMachine Feb 12, 2013, 11:07:54 AM
Not too sure how good my critique will be since this is only my third and I've only done them on literature but I hope it meets good standards.

Vision: 5 stars. This piece is hauntingly beautiful and creepy in many ways. The way the woman is bound to the tree and the ground is wonderfully done and the many branches with the eyeballs that follow my mouse around just give me this chill running down my spine. Perfection.

Originality: 5 stars. I must admit I have never seen this done before in my life and it is amazing.

Technique: 5 stars. The way it is drawn and colored really adds to that eerie yet smooth feel of the piece. The way the eyeballs move feels smooth, like water.

Impact: 5 stars. An amazing, original piece that is wonderfully done.

I love this piece and I hope my critique is good.
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Wow I just realized the eyes move! The idea is magnificent and I believe you were capable of portraying a very unsettling feeling with the eye interactivity. However, I will just say that the effect is slightly lost due to the shadows moving in conjunction with the eyes. As a fellow Flash user, I would recommend that you made the eyes themselves shadowless while keeping the original programming on them so they still move. Then, layer a graphic representation of the shadows and highlights (anything with an alpha gradient that simulates it will do) on top of the eyes. That way, the eyes will still move while leaving the shadows and highlights stay in place for a much nicer look. Just a technique recommendation or course, but such a nice idea deserves the little extra work.
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popcorn6765 Featured By Owner Jan 13, 2015
That is cool
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Pixx-73 Featured By Owner Jan 16, 2015  Professional Digital Artist
Thank you.
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:iconbianca-di-palermo:
Bianca-di-Palermo Featured By Owner Oct 17, 2014
Hi ! Your work is impressive and give me inspiration. I'm trying to do the same effect with flash, can you explain to me how you did it please ? ^^
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Orionnator Featured By Owner May 6, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
THAT SCARED ME.
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Pixx-73 Featured By Owner May 7, 2014  Professional Digital Artist
It was the intention. :)
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:iconfriecco:
friecco Featured By Owner Sep 2, 2014
like this? :D
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:bow:
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Pixx-73 Featured By Owner Sep 2, 2014  Professional Digital Artist
Of course. :D
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SpectreChaser Featured By Owner Feb 14, 2014
wow how did you make those eyes move? :O
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:iconpixx-73:
Pixx-73 Featured By Owner Feb 17, 2014  Professional Digital Artist
Just actionscript in flash. :)
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:iconthewizard747:
thewizard747 Featured By Owner Feb 14, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Really cool, great imagination!
I love how the eyes move when the mouse is near them.
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Pixx-73 Featured By Owner Feb 17, 2014  Professional Digital Artist
Many thanks, I am glad you like it. :)
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RinneLin Featured By Owner Feb 7, 2014
creepy eyes Clap 
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:iconpixx-73:
Pixx-73 Featured By Owner Feb 11, 2014  Professional Digital Artist
Thank you. :)
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HARLEMGLOBEHUMPERS Featured By Owner Jan 7, 2014  Student General Artist
OHMYGAWD!!!!!!!!!! THE EYES THEY MOVE!!! oh shit that makes me so happy
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Pixx-73 Featured By Owner Jan 7, 2014  Professional Digital Artist
Many thanks! :D
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Xantipa2-2D3DPhotoM Featured By Owner Nov 17, 2013
Perfect :clap:
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Pixx-73 Featured By Owner Nov 20, 2013  Professional Digital Artist
Thanks! :)
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Xantipa2-2D3DPhotoM Featured By Owner Nov 20, 2013
 :iconsayhiplz:Heart ..:iconlovelyplz:
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:iconmarthahull:
marthahull Featured By Owner Nov 5, 2013  Professional Traditional Artist
The interactive thing is amazing. I was sold even before I moved the mouse.
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:iconpixx-73:
Pixx-73 Featured By Owner Nov 20, 2013  Professional Digital Artist
Many thanks. :)
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EvaPolly Featured By Owner Oct 21, 2013
A very thought provoking work... (also, fun to move the mouse :nod:)
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:iconpixx-73:
Pixx-73 Featured By Owner Oct 21, 2013  Professional Digital Artist
Nice to hear it, thank you very much Vanja for your comment. :-)
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:iconchristinawood:
ChristinaWood Featured By Owner Oct 7, 2013   Traditional Artist
Fantastic!
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:iconpixx-73:
Pixx-73 Featured By Owner Oct 8, 2013  Professional Digital Artist
Thank you very much. :)
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Mr-Ripley Featured By Owner Sep 6, 2013  Professional Digital Artist
Amazing! How did the eyes move and follow my mouse? =D
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:iconpixx-73:
Pixx-73 Featured By Owner Sep 10, 2013  Professional Digital Artist
Just actionscript in flash. :) Thank you very much. :thanks:
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crazyruthie Featured By Owner Jul 29, 2013   Traditional Artist
you have been featured in the :iconspirals-and-swirls: "dark" feature. yay!
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Pixx-73 Featured By Owner Sep 17, 2013  Professional Digital Artist
Oh, thanks so much, I appreciate it. I am so sorry for late replay.
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:iconpjs1998:
pjs1998 Featured By Owner Jun 21, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Very cool!
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:iconpixx-73:
Pixx-73 Featured By Owner Jun 24, 2013  Professional Digital Artist
Thanks so much. :)
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:iconpjs1998:
pjs1998 Featured By Owner Jun 24, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
My pleasure...thanks for sharing!
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Marty4110 Featured By Owner Jun 17, 2013
Sehr komisch ist! Ich hab dies gern.
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:iconpixx-73:
Pixx-73 Featured By Owner Jun 18, 2013  Professional Digital Artist
Ist mir ein Vergnügen. Danke. :)
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sags Featured By Owner Jun 13, 2013
Love the way you can revolve one eye completely and the others just look on :clap:
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Pixx-73 Featured By Owner Jun 13, 2013  Professional Digital Artist
Thank you very much for your comment. :)
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Lord-Iluvatar Featured By Owner Jun 13, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
fucking love it!!!
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Pixx-73 Featured By Owner Jun 13, 2013  Professional Digital Artist
Many thanks. :D
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peroni68 Featured By Owner Jun 12, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
omg! That's awesome!!!!
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Pixx-73 Featured By Owner Jun 13, 2013  Professional Digital Artist
Thank you so much. :)
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peroni68 Featured By Owner Jun 14, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
My great pleasure! :)
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:iconstebev:
stebev Featured By Owner Apr 29, 2013
brilliant image even without the eye movement
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Pixx-73 Featured By Owner May 2, 2013  Professional Digital Artist
Thank you very much. :)
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BranislavFabijanic Featured By Owner Apr 29, 2013   Photographer
amazing work!
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Pixx-73 Featured By Owner May 2, 2013  Professional Digital Artist
Thank you so much. :)
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BranislavFabijanic Featured By Owner May 2, 2013   Photographer
my pleasure! :-)
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MeFlyingFree Featured By Owner Apr 22, 2013  Professional General Artist
OMG! This is so awesome!
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Pixx-73 Featured By Owner Apr 23, 2013  Professional Digital Artist
Oh, thanks so much. :)
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MeFlyingFree Featured By Owner Apr 24, 2013  Professional General Artist
My pleasure :aww:
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Krshn12 Featured By Owner Apr 19, 2013  Professional Digital Artist
Fantastic. Never imagined before. Found the link from Kaktusmumkate.
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Pixx-73 Featured By Owner Apr 23, 2013  Professional Digital Artist
Thank you very much, I am glad you like it. :)
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